I think this story about Chrolli's first time is my favourite one! The words you use to describe Chrsitian's state of mind are so powerful. Love the end too. Great job!!!
Thank you, it's worth a great deal because I really wanted feedback on my stories and it's great to get such positive comments. Thanks again!
Words really are Christian's achilles heel....
I hope you will share more of your stories.
Thank you so much for your feedback on my stories, it's really great to get such positive comments. I do have more ideas for stories and so hopefully will post some more soon. Thanks again!
It's so good to read a story about their first time again. I really enjoyed their sex and the emotions that come along with it. :D
Just a little hint: You may want to mark the language "English" for your stories so they will be displayed in "Latest English Fics". I think it will be easier to find them there for many readers.
Thanks for the hint! And for the feedback, as this is the first time I've posted anything I've written its great to know what people think and if they enjoyed reading my stories. Thank you!
Thank you so much for your comments on all three stories - although I've been writing for a while this is the first time I've put anything out there for people to read, so its fantastic to get such positive feedback! Thanks again.