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Title: Broken Reviewer: Nalunelly2 Signed

Wonderful stories. You brought me back to the feelings I had when I first started watching Chrolli and you really got Christian's POV. There were a number of phrases I really liked  "yet brittle with exhilaration", heated colour,  Olli; bright, beautiful, his.  "shaking soul". I look forward to reading more of your stories. 

Author's Response:

Thank you, that's a fantastic compliment and I'm so pleased you like what I have written. More stories on their way! thanks again.

Date: 06/23/2012 05:29 [Report This]
Title: Broken Reviewer: andc39 Signed

The way you captured Christian's anguish here is incredible...

Well done...

Date: 06/18/2012 03:01 [Report This]
Title: Broken Reviewer: Tagro Signed

That was such an emotional scene back then and I think you captured Christian's struggle wonderfully!

Date: 06/18/2012 01:39 [Report This]
Title: Broken Reviewer: Sable Signed
Oh my goodness You have made Christian's POV so real. Through your words I could picture his fight for supremacy over Choosing his brother or Olli. Then the choice being made. Excellent piece absolutely precise.
Date: 06/17/2012 23:26 [Report This]
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