In my personal universe, the Christian & Olli's story ended when Thore left the show. Christian took the job in England, Olli followed him there shortly thereafter and got a job managing a gay nightclub in London, and none of that crap with more cheating by both of them or a second divorce ever happened. As far as I'm concerned all that stuff happened in an alternate universe the VL writers had to invent because Thore was leaving.
BUT, if I did accept the AU that played out on screen as reality, I would want your story to be what happened next. I think you did a great job with keeping both of the guys in character and telling a story where they get the happy ending they deserved. Thanks for writing it!